Decoy — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

Is the angler fish ever tempted by its own bait? Does it ever stir from whatever trance-like state passes for sleep in the aphotic zone, see the glowing decoy & think, Ah — mine! & surge forward, jaws agape, like the proverbial donkey tempted by a carrot? Or does it get snappish at its traveling companion, persistent as a bad conscience, haunting as the image of its own death?

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Dave Bonta's poem is made of questions. He imagines an angler fish in the pitch-dark deep and wonders whether the glowing lure it dangles to trap other creatures could ever trap the fish itself. Would it wake from its odd, trance-like sleep, spot the light, think "mine!" and lunge, like a donkey chasing a carrot?

The speaker never settles on an answer. Instead he offers a second, darker possibility: that the fish resents the lure, treating it like an annoying companion that never leaves. By the end the light has become something like a bad conscience, and then "the image of its own death." The bait that keeps the fish alive also reminds it of what it is.

The mood is quiet, curious and a little eerie. There's gentle humor in the donkey comparison, but the poem slides toward unease. It's hard not to read the fish as a stand-in for anyone shadowed by their own tools of survival, though the poem only hints at this.

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