Rubaiyat — Summary

Dave BontaRomantic

September morning just cool enough to show the soil’s breath. Forest in fog, new gold under old green, give me

your delectable frost, fine web of lines, the wind- fallen apple that fits so snugly in the palm

& when I take a bite it bites back. Who’d want their sugar straight, without some tartness? Give it to me

dry, as they say of wine. Impure, like every true love. And the must – ah, let it settle to the bottom

week by week until all the fog is gone & the bottle brims with light!

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Dave Bonta's "Rubaiyat" begins on a cool September morning and turns into a kind of toast to autumn. The speaker looks at a foggy forest and asks it, almost like a prayer, for its gifts: frost, and a fallen apple that sits perfectly in the hand. Biting into it, the speaker finds it "bites back," and that sharpness becomes the poem's real subject. Sweetness alone isn't enough; the speaker wants some tartness, a wine that's "dry," a love that is "impure."

The last stanza shifts from apples to wine. The cloudy "must" settles week by week, the fog clears, and the bottle ends up "brim[ming] with light." The poem suggests that time and patience turn rough, murky things into something clear and glowing.

The mood is warm, appreciative, and a little playful. The speaker isn't mourning the end of summer. They're relishing autumn's bite, and the imperfections that make life, and love, taste real.

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