The claw — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

Snow annealed by sun on a tin roof, followed by a cold night, holds together the next day as it slides off the edge & begins to yaw, curling under the eaves: a white claw. I think of a Siberian tiger with corrugations for stripes, hell-bent on breaking out of its fort. The icicles’ dagger-tips drip with their own fluid — saliva of a sort. A wavy sky always denotes a clash of dry & wet: unsettled weather. An ambiguous threat.

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Dave Bonta watches a slab of snow slide off a tin roof and sees something alive in it. After sun melts the snow and a cold night refreezes it, the mass holds together as it slips over the edge, curling under the eaves into "a white claw." From there the poem's imagination takes off: the roof's corrugations become a Siberian tiger's stripes, and the house becomes a fort the animal is "hell-bent" on escaping. The icicles add to the picture, their tips like daggers, their drips like saliva.

The speaker seems fascinated more than frightened. The tone is observant and a little playful, as the comparisons pile up. But the ending shifts. The "wavy sky" signals a clash of dry and wet, "unsettled weather," and the last line, "An ambiguous threat," leaves things uneasy. The danger is half joke, half real, and the poem doesn't settle which.

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