Supposition — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

Suppose it’s true: that as you walk, another is walking within you, perfectly coterminous with your own walking. Suppose it’s true that as you sit, another sits within, weathering you, like the coal inside the ember. I don’t like to think that our bodies are mere vessels — or vassals — but suppose it’s true. It might explain these odd, apparently random urges to hold & be held, or to lose ourselves through concentration: the not-us within wants to reach the not-us without. It might explain why, as we slowly tighten around our cores, strands of white begin to appear on our heads, an extra light glimmers behind the eyes, & a network of cracks under the skin begins to offer glimpses of an inner blue. Suppose it’s literally true that heaven is within. Would even this be as illuminating as the knowledge that we are risen from the ocean, descended from the trees?

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Dave Bonta's "Supposition" asks us to try on a strange idea: that each of us carries a second presence inside, moving and sitting in perfect step with us. The speaker admits he doesn't like thinking of bodies as "mere vessels — or vassals," but he plays along anyway, repeating "suppose it's true" like someone testing a thought out loud.

What makes the idea appealing is how much it seems to explain. Our urges to hold someone, or to vanish into deep concentration, become the inner self reaching for another inner self. Aging turns tender rather than sad: white hair, a glimmer behind the eyes, and cracks in the skin that let an "inner blue" show through.

The ending shifts the question. Even if heaven were literally inside us, the speaker wonders, would that be as illuminating as knowing we rose from the ocean and came down from the trees? The mood is curious, quiet, and quietly awed, more wonder than doubt.

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