Hypothesis — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

What if it’s true: that as you walk, another is walking within you, perfectly coterminous with your own walking? What if it’s true that as you sit, another sits within, weathering you, like the coal inside the ember? I don’t like to think that our bodies are mere vessels — or vassals — but what if they were? It could explain these odd, apparently random urges to hold & be held, or to lose oneself through concentration: the not-me within wants to reach the not-me without. Sounds plausible, doesn’t it? Maybe that’s how a finger continues to itch after the amputation of the arm, & why, as we slowly tighten around our cores, strands of white begin to appear on our heads, an extra light glimmers behind the eyes, & a network of cracks under the skin begins to offer glimpses of an inner blue: heaven is within, just as the mystics always said! True or not, it’s enough to make me think about counting every last breath.

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Dave Bonta's "Hypothesis" starts with a strange, playful question: what if another self is moving inside you, step for step, every time you walk or sit? The speaker follows the idea wherever it leads. Maybe our bodies are vessels, or even servants, for this inner presence, and our urges to hold someone or to lose ourselves in concentration are really the hidden self reaching toward another hidden self outside us.

The tone is curious and half-teasing. "Sounds plausible, doesn't it?" invites us to play along, while the speaker admits discomfort with the idea. Then aging enters. White hair, a glimmer behind the eyes, and cracks in the skin showing "an inner blue" become signs of something inside slowly coming into view. The mystics' claim that heaven is within gets a physical, almost literal twist.

The ending is quiet and moving. Whether or not the idea is true, it makes the speaker want to pay attention to life, even to "counting every last breath." The mood is wonder tinged with mortality.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Plea bargain

I hear half a beat of drum to serve time have half a hope in the meantime praise God
DreamyDave Bonta

Cibola 3

I awake in the dark and shake free of sheets & blankets, of down-filled quilt. The rituals of waking– the long, hot shower, the coffee–give
ContemplativeDave Bonta

In good light

On a maple’s pale bark, a zigzag ladder—old tooth-marks from a wandering snail? Green islands of moss