Spaceship Earth — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

The chair in the forest accommodates a cushion of moss — better than the bedspring, which collects dead leaves & the rare blackberry sprout. The canes never get too far in their explorations of the dappled light before a deer discovers them & has them for breakfast, spines & all, threading her hooves through the rusty coils & the jumble of squarish stones where walls once rested. High overhead, a scarlet tanager grooms under his wingpits during each pause in his recital. If only the lice that live humdrum lives in the forest of his feathers could see him as we do! An idea of perfection, a glimmering jewel alone in the overgrown void.

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Dave Bonta's "Spaceship Earth" begins at ground level, with a discarded chair in the woods, and ends in something like outer space. It covers that distance in nineteen lines. The poem works by changing scale. It starts with a chair and a bedspring, moves up to a deer and a bird, then drops down to the lice in the bird's feathers. In the last line it pulls back until the whole forest is a speck.

The opening is quietly funny. "The chair in the forest accommodates / a cushion of moss" makes the chair sound like a hotel host and the moss like a guest, and nature takes over the human object without any fuss. The bedspring is "better than" nothing, we are told, because it "collects dead leaves," as though it were a hobbyist. Other signs of human life are fading too. The deer threads her hooves "through the rusty coils / & the jumble of squarish stones / where walls once rested." The poem never says what the walls belonged to, but judging by the imagery, this was once a lived-in place. The word "rested" is gentle. The walls haven't collapsed so much as lain down, and the "squarish" stones show a speaker who is relaxed about precision.

That relaxed voice shapes the form. The poem is free verse with no rhyme and no regular beat, and it reads like a sentence spoken on a walk. Its line breaks add small surprises. "Before a deer discovers them & has them" breaks just before "for breakfast," so the blackberry canes are eaten in the gap between two lines. The ampersands keep the tone casual and handwritten, and they tie the clauses into one long, wandering breath. The phrase "spines & all" is another sly touch, because the deer swallows the thorns without a flinch.

The tanager changes the poem's register. "A scarlet tanager / grooms under his wingpits / during each pause in his recital." The word "recital" turns birdsong into a concert, and the bird into a performer who keeps scratching himself between numbers. The colour, the music and the ordinary bodily itch are all there at once. Then the poem turns to the lice, "that live humdrum lives / in the forest of his feathers." "Humdrum" has a hum inside it, so it suggests both dullness and a small insect drone. The forest metaphor also makes the poem fold in on itself. The bird sings in a forest, and the lice live in a forest on the bird.

The final sentence is the poem's real subject. "If only the lice... could see him as we do! An idea / of perfection, a glimmering jewel." The lice know the bird too closely, as a landscape to be worked through, and we see him from a distance, as a gem. Perfection here depends on distance. Yet the poem doesn't let us feel superior for long. The jewel is "alone in the overgrown void," and that phrase finally brings in the title. The forest becomes a ship drifting through empty space, and the bird is its brightest object. The "we" who admire him may then be the lice of some larger view. Read that way, our own sense of Earth as a glimmering jewel is also the view of someone far enough away not to feel the itch. This is an inference from the title and the last line, not something the poem says outright.

There is a small contradiction in "alone." The bird is hardly alone, since he is crowded with tenants. The poem seems to know this. The word belongs to the viewer's idealising distance, and the lice are the evidence against it.

The poem is significant because it manages a big idea without any grand language. It never mentions the planet, the universe or mortality directly. It lets a chair, a deer and a bird do the work, and it shows how much our admiration depends on where we stand. A moss-covered chair and a bedspring full of leaves are not obvious places to start an argument about perception, but by the end the reader has been moved from the forest floor to a view of the whole planet.

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