Rat Snake — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

We were just talking about you crooked tunnel

the way you funnel your long freight up the walnut tree serpent

& glide out along one diminishing limb until you reach the roof drop into the gutter & loop into a squirrel hole above the kitchen

We’d just found one of your old skins snagged on a thorn I don’t think he’s coming back for it I joked

And my neighbor glances up into the tree & says Well there he is now

And there you were son of a bitch still & heavy as a tongue with bad news

waiting for a signal neither of us caught to set you back into motion into path into limbless dragon flicking your soft Y of flame

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The speaker and a neighbor are chatting about a rat snake that lives in and around the walnut tree, even tracing its route in the speaker's mind: up the trunk, along a branch, onto the roof, into a squirrel hole above the kitchen. They find a shed skin caught on a thorn, and the speaker jokes that its owner won't be back for it. Then the neighbor looks up, and the snake is right there.

The mood shifts from casual, amused talk to a hushed, slightly unnerved attention. The speaker seems startled, and the mild insult "son of a bitch" reads as a mix of surprise and grudging respect. The snake is compared to a tongue "with bad news," which makes its stillness feel loaded, as if it knows something. The poem ends with the snake imagined as a "limbless dragon" with a flickering "Y of flame," so an ordinary backyard animal becomes something mythic and a little dangerous.

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