Self quarantine — Summary

drum with a hole in it having one opinion

as a great loser and builder he knows it is unsafe

in the intricate thriving ruin of his mind

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Dave Bonta's short poem turns the idea of isolation inward. Instead of describing a room or a street, it describes a mind, and it isn't a flattering picture. The opening image, a drum with a hole in it, suggests something that can no longer resound. A drum is made to be hit and to make noise, but this one is broken. Paired with "having one opinion," it hints at a thinking that goes around the same point again and again, with little echo or variety.

The figure at the center is called "a great loser and builder," which is a nice contradiction. He keeps making things and keeps losing them. He knows it's "unsafe" to be inside his own head, yet the final lines call that place "intricate" and "thriving," even while it is a "ruin." The mood is wry and uneasy. The speaker seems to see both the damage and a strange, living richness in it, and the title suggests that being shut in with yourself brings both.

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