Tango — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

touch me well till I dance without any legs

a piece of clockwork where a man’s age is shown

we end in the dirt and I like it madam you know me

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Nine short lines, no punctuation, and a whole life gets danced through. Dave Bonta's "Tango" starts in desire, passes through the cold ticking of time, and ends in the ground. The speaker, remarkably, is content with the arrangement. The central idea is that appetite and mortality are dance partners, and the wisest thing the body can do is lean in and enjoy the music.

The opening is a request that sounds half like a command: "touch me well / till I dance without / any legs." "Well" can mean skillfully, but it also hints at wellness, so the touch is imagined as something that heals or transforms. The result is a paradox. The speaker wants to be handled so expertly that dancing no longer needs legs. This can be read as ecstasy, the feeling of being carried beyond one's own body. It can also be read more darkly, as a body whose legs have failed, or as a puppet moved by someone else's hands. The poem never chooses between these readings. The line break helps: "without" hangs at the end of its line, and the speaker is briefly left with nothing before "any legs" arrives.

The second stanza swerves into cold machinery: "a piece of clockwork / where a man's age / is shown." The speaker has become a mechanism, perhaps a watch whose dial displays the years. The shift from the intimate "I" to the general "a man" widens the poem from one dancer to everyone. A clock also suits a tango, which runs on strict, measured steps. Every beat of the dance is a tick, and every tick uses something up. The word "shown" adds another thought. In a close embrace, age can't be hidden, because the partner feels it. Being held means being read.

The last stanza brings the two partners together for the first time: "we end in the dirt." The plain word "dirt" is blunter than "grave" or "earth," and it has none of the solemnity of a funeral. It can also sound earthy and a little bawdy, and the next line leans into that tone: "and I like it madam." Who "madam" is stays open. She could be the dance partner, a figure running the dance hall, or Death herself in a polite hat. The tone is cheeky, the voice of someone who has stopped pretending. The closing "you know me" works as a confession and a shrug at once. It also loops back to the poem's first words, since "touch me" has become "know me." Physical contact, over the course of nine lines, has turned into recognition.

The form supports this. There is no rhyme, and the poem doesn't need any, because the wordplay does the binding. "Well," "till," "legs," "end," and "dirt" all share short, clipped vowels, which keeps the poem sounding tight and a little hard-edged. The line lengths also follow a pattern. Each stanza closes on a short line ("any legs," "is shown," "you know me"), like a dancer coming to a sudden stop. The lines before those endings are longer and carry momentum, so the poem moves in a rhythm of glide and halt. There is no punctuation at all, not even a final full stop. The poem simply ends, as if the dance goes on in the dirt.

The poem is significant for how much it fits into so little space. It draws on the old image of the dance with death but removes the usual solemnity. Mortality is not mourned or argued with here. It appears as a partner the speaker already knows well, someone who can be addressed with a wry "madam." The ideas are large, but the language stays ordinary: touch, clock, dirt, like. Its main insight is that the body is a clock and a dance floor at the same time, and the poem asks whether you can enjoy the dance while the clock is running. Its answer is yes, so long as you are honest about where the dance ends.

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