Minor romance — Summary

Dave BontaRomantic

a catalogue of ash for my trouble

a story of love for a bad bad world

the hierarchy will shake as we lie below

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Dave Bonta's three short stanzas read like a quiet bargain struck with a harsh world. The title, "Minor romance," sounds modest, almost apologetic, and the poem seems to treat love that way: small, unofficial, easy to overlook. Yet the speaker values it. In return for "my trouble" they get only "a catalogue of ash," a list of what has burned away. That image suggests loss, wear, and disappointment, and it sounds a little wry, as if the speaker is shrugging at a poor payment.

Against that comes "a story of love / for a bad bad world." The repeated "bad" feels almost childlike, a plain way of saying things are wrong. Love becomes a kind of offering or comfort. The last stanza turns defiant. As the couple "lie below," the "hierarchy will shake," which suggests that intimacy, even a minor one, can unsettle power. The mood is tender, tired, and quietly rebellious, with a small spark of hope left in the ashes.

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