News consumption — Poem analysis

Dave BontaAnxious

all morning alone with the paper

like a hard- to-escape prison

or the flag of some country we are made to fear

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Nobody is arrested in Dave Bonta's "News consumption," and nobody even leaves the house, yet by the final line the reader feels both confined and threatened. In about twenty-five words, the poem makes a quiet argument: reading the news can be less like looking out of a window and more like being shut in a cell.

The title is a good place to start. "Consumption" is a word from eating and shopping, and we do talk about consuming media the way we consume breakfast. But it is also an old name for a wasting illness, and it is tempting to hear that second meaning faintly underneath. That reading is an inference, not something the poem states, but it fits. The opening couplet, "all morning alone / with the paper," has the feel of a meal, yet the phrase "all morning" suggests hours quietly being used up. We take in the paper, and the paper takes something back.

The poem's construction is deliberately bare. It is three couplets of free verse with no rhyme, no capital letters and no punctuation, not even a final full stop. It is also one long sentence fragment with almost no verb; the only one, "are made," arrives in the last line. Nothing happens in it. A situation is simply held up and compared to two other things, which suits a subject as static as sitting with a newspaper. The missing full stop matters too, because the news is never finished. Tomorrow's edition is already on its way.

The first comparison, "like a hard- / to-escape prison," is where the line break does real work. Splitting the compound adjective strands a hyphen at the end of a line, like a little bar, and the reader has to jump the gap to get to "to-escape." The phrase itself is awkwardly bureaucratic, and the poet could have written "inescapable." "Hard to escape" is more honest and more disturbing. It admits that the door is not locked, that the reader could simply put the paper down, and that somehow they don't. The prison is partly self-built.

Sound ties the images together. "Paper" and "prison" share their opening *p*, so the simile is sealed by sound before the reader has time to question it. The same thing happens at the end with "flag" and "fear," where the *f* connects the symbol to the feeling it is meant to produce.

The second comparison, "the flag of some country / we are made to fear," shifts the poem sideways. A flag is an emblem, not a place, so the line quietly suggests that the paper gives us symbols of other countries rather than knowledge of them. The country is only "some country," vague and interchangeable, which implies the fear works whichever nation is named. The grammar adds to the unease. "We are made to fear" is passive, and it never says who does the making. The poem leaves the reader to look back at the object on the table and supply the answer.

That is also where the pronoun changes. The poem begins in isolation, with "alone," and ends in the plural "we." The solitary reader turns out to be one of many, each alone at a separate kitchen table, all being steered toward the same anxiety. Loneliness becomes a shared condition, and the poem's one moment of community is a community of the frightened.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it leaves out. It never says what is in the paper, whether the stories are true, or whether the fear is justified. It describes only the effect of reading, a feeling of being held in place and pointed at an enemy. That restraint keeps it from sounding like a lecture. A modern reader may also find that "the paper" slides easily into "the phone," and the poem still works. The surface changes, but the morning hours, the solitude and the last word, "fear," are recognisable. A reader finishes it by glancing at whatever they have been scrolling through and wondering who made them afraid.

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