Prospects — Poem analysis

Dave BontaAnxious

here where I find gold am I hunting myself

and where I find a hole do I move as fast as I can

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"Prospects" is a word that pulls two ways. To prospect is to walk rough ground looking for something valuable beneath it, and a person's prospects are what lie ahead, the odds of how life will turn out. Dave Bonta's four-line poem keeps both meanings alive, then folds them into one unsettling idea: whatever the speaker finds, good or bad, the search keeps leading back to the speaker.

The poem is built as two matching couplets. Each begins with a "where" clause naming what is found, "gold" and then "a hole", and each flips into a question with the verb placed ahead of the subject: "am I hunting myself," "do I move as fast as I can." There are no question marks, no capital letters and no punctuation at all. That leaves the questions hanging. We can't tell whether the speaker is genuinely unsure, asking rhetorically, or half-answering as he goes. The opening word "here" also matters, because it plants the speaker on a particular spot, as if he were standing at the edge of a claim, looking down at what he has turned up.

The first couplet quietly changes metaphors. Gold belongs to mining, but the verb is "hunting," which belongs to the chase. Prospector and hunter merge, and the thing hunted turns out to be "myself." The line can be read warmly: the value I seek is a reflection of who I am, and in finding treasure I find my own wants and character. It can also be read darkly, with the speaker as both hunter and prey, pursued by his own greed or ambition. The poem doesn't choose between these, and the lack of punctuation helps keep both open.

The second couplet turns from reflection to action. A hole in prospecting is a failed dig, an empty shaft, and it is also a pit someone could fall into. The speaker's response is to "move as fast as I can," but the poem never says in which direction. He might be fleeing the emptiness, leaving the spot and moving on to the next claim, or rushing headlong toward the hole. Set beside the first couplet, the lines suggest something sharper. If gold is a glimpse of the self, then a hole is its absence, and absence is what we hurry away from. The contrast is neat. Success makes the speaker stop and ask what he is doing, while failure makes him run without asking anything.

Sound and rhythm support this reading. There is no rhyme, but "gold" and "hole" share a long o and a closing l, and they sit in the same place at the end of each couplet's first line. The echo makes treasure and emptiness feel like near-twins, almost the same word with a slight turn. The lines also grow longer: five syllables, then six, six, and eight. The last line, "do I move as fast as I can," is made entirely of one-syllable words, and it is hard to read slowly. The line speeds up as it describes speed, and it ends on "can," a word about limits, with no sense of arriving anywhere.

Look, too, at how crowded the poem is with the speaker. The word "I" appears five times in four lines, and "myself" makes six. For a poem about searching, it contains almost nothing to search: no landscape, no tools, no other people. The only terrain is the speaker, which is exactly what the question in line two suggests.

That compression is where the poem's significance lies. In so few words it takes the familiar image of the gold-seeker and turns it into a question about motive. We usually think of searching as reaching outward, toward riches or success, but here it curves back on itself. It also declines to say whether gold or a hole is the better thing to find, since either one sends the speaker back to himself. A reader finishes it with the title's double meaning still working: our prospects, our future chances, may depend less on what we dig up than on why we are digging and what we do when the ground gives way.

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