Sacred hearts club — Poem analysis

Dave BontaRomantic

a body in pain is ready for prayer on Friday

so I invited her to come dine with me on Sunday

and invent a better theory of music with our bed

this summer fleet as a secret told to my pen

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Between Friday and Sunday there is a missing day. Dave Bonta's "Sacred hearts club" names the two days on either side and says nothing of Saturday, and that silence is where much of the poem's meaning sits. It is a short poem about what a person in pain can be offered besides comfort: company, a meal, a shared bed, and the chance to make something new together.

The first stanza starts in the abstract. "A body in pain / is ready for prayer" sounds almost like a general rule, and the speaker doesn't say whose body it is. The idea is quietly unsettling, because it suggests suffering makes a person receptive, as if pain opens a door. Then the second stanza turns the abstraction into a person: "so I invited her." The word "so" matters. The speaker doesn't treat prayer as the end of the matter but as a reason to act, and his action is practical and warm, an invitation to dinner. The Friday-to-Sunday pattern may also recall the Christian week, with suffering on Friday and renewal on Sunday. That is an inference, but the title's "sacred hearts" supports it, and the poem seems to translate that old pattern into a domestic, human-sized version. Here the meal replaces the altar.

The third stanza is the boldest. The two will "invent a better / theory of music / with our bed." A bed is an odd instrument, and "theory" is an odd word for love. Music theory is cool and intellectual, while a bed is warm and bodily, and the poem makes no effort to separate them. The line break after "better" leaves the word hanging for a moment, as if the poem is also reaching for improvement. The word "our" quietly confirms their intimacy, and "invent" suggests that existing theories, perhaps existing ideas of how pain should be treated, aren't enough. The sacred and the erotic stop being opposites here. Both are ways a body can be attended to.

Formally, the poem is four unrhymed tercets in short lines of only a few syllables, so it moves slowly and plainly. It has no rhyme scheme, but there are small echoes that hold it together. "Friday" and "Sunday" end lines in matching sounds, so the days chime like a bell struck twice. "Pain" and "prayer" are linked by their opening *p*, which makes the move from one to the other feel almost natural. The syntax also changes pace. The first stanza is a self-contained statement, but the second and third spill into each other through enjambment ("to come dine with me / on Sunday // and invent a better..."), so the invitation flows straight into the music without a full stop. The effect is of one thought carrying the reader along.

The last stanza shifts the focus to the speaker himself: "this summer / fleet as a secret / told to my pen." It has no verb, which makes it feel like a glimpse more than a sentence. "Fleet" suggests speed, and the simile pairs the season with a secret. Both are things that slip away if you aren't careful. The secret is told to the pen rather than to another person, which makes the pen a kind of confessor, and the poem itself the confession. There is a gentle irony in this. A secret told to a pen is meant to be written down, and we are now reading it. The poem keeps the secret and gives it away in the same moment.

The poem is significant because of how much it holds in so little space. It treats pain as something that can lead to prayer, to hospitality, to pleasure and to art, without making any of these steps sound grand. Its tone is almost shy, and that restraint lets the surprising image of the bed and the theory of music stay with the reader. It also suggests, without insisting, that the way through suffering may be to find a companion and make something together, even if the season is short and only a pen is there to remember it.

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