Plowman — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

daybreak and I am ready to answer no to anything

my shoes dirty with walking in the fields

I wear the ground like a strange piece of ignorance

after so many oats charged with growing

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At daybreak, when plenty of poems would offer a blessing, Dave Bonta's plowman offers a refusal. "I am ready / to answer no to anything" is a startling way to begin a working day. The poem never says what is being asked or who is asking, and that gap is deliberate. The speaker is braced against questions, demands and proposals in general. What follows suggests where this stubbornness comes from. It is not arrogance. It comes from long, physical, unglamorous labour, and from a kind of knowledge that doesn't turn into words or opinions.

The poem is built from three unrhymed couplets. There are no capital letters and no punctuation, not even a full stop at the end. This looks plain on the page, but the plainness does work. Without commas, the lines slide into one another, and the line breaks decide where we pause. "Ready" hangs at the end of the first line for a moment before the second line tells us what the speaker is ready for. The same thing happens with "the ground" and "growing." The couplets are short, with only a handful of syllables in some lines, and this fits a speaker who is economical with speech. The title also carries more weight than usual. The word "plow" never appears in the poem, so "Plowman" quietly supplies the identity of the "I" and the reason for the dirty shoes.

The imagery moves from the practical to the strange. The shoes are "dirty with walking / in the fields," an ordinary detail, almost a shrug. Then comes the poem's boldest move: "I wear the ground / like a strange piece of ignorance." Clothing is a familiar metaphor, but here the garment is soil, and the soil is "ignorance." Two readings seem possible, judging by the wording. One is that the earth is something the plowman can never fully know, however many fields he has walked, so he wears his not-knowing like a coat. The other is that the ignorance is a mark of distance from people who have answers for everything. The word "strange" matters here. It suggests the speaker looks at his own condition with some surprise, as if the ground has become part of him without his quite understanding how. That sits oddly beside the confident "no" of the opening, and the tension is productive. The speaker can refuse anything because he claims to know so little.

The last couplet shifts from the speaker to the crop: "after so many oats / charged with growing." Oats are a humble, practical grain, and the phrase "so many" implies repetition, season after season of the same work. The key word is "charged." It can mean entrusted with a duty, as the oats are given the task of growing. It can also mean loaded with energy, as a battery is charged, which makes the plants feel almost electric with life. A third, darker sense of being "charged" with a crime is faintly audible too, in a poem that began with a refusal. The syntax is left open. "After so many oats" does not tell us what comes after, and the poem simply stops on "growing," a present participle that is never finished. Growth is ongoing and outside the plowman's control, so the grammar leaves it unfinished.

Sound ties the poem together quietly. "Answer," "no" and "anything" repeat the same nasal consonants in the opening couplet, so the refusal seems to hum. "Ground" and "growing" echo each other across the second and third couplets, linking the soil to what comes out of it. Even "daybreak," a hard, compound word, snaps the poem open like a gate latch.

The poem's significance lies in what it declines to do. It does not romanticise farm work or turn the field into a pretty backdrop. It offers no moral and no explanation, and it lets one odd metaphor, the ground worn as ignorance, carry the whole idea. In six lines it suggests that working close to the earth might make a person humble and unyielding at once, sure of one thing, which is that growth is not his to command. For a student reader, it is a good example of how little a poem needs to say when each word is doing two jobs.

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