On Deciding Not to Travel — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

From the window of the fourth- floor walk-up, the umbrellas slid past each other with assembly-line perfection, black & blue mingling with the occasional red, yellow, lime-green. The street shone like a mirror that gives nothing back. The hiss of tires. This short loop keeps playing in my head as I watch the cloud lift & a white moth, caught out after daybreak, yawing & veering against a backdrop of dripping trees. This summer won’t come again. Why spend it en route to somewhere else? I pluck a snail from the deep grass & place it on my palm. It makes a slow circuit on its single foot.

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Dave Bonta's speaker watches rain from a high apartment window, where umbrellas drift past one another so neatly that they seem manufactured. The wet street gleams "like a mirror that gives nothing back," and the scene starts to feel like a loop the mind can't shut off. It is a picture of motion without meaning, everyone passing through on the way to somewhere else.

Then the poem turns. The cloud lifts, a moth struggles unsteadily against the dripping trees, and the speaker reaches a decision: "This summer won't come again. / Why spend it en route / to somewhere else?" The title tells us the choice is to stay put. The final image, a snail crossing the speaker's palm on its single foot, makes that choice concrete. The mood is quiet and gently content. Where the city's crowd is hurried and blank, the snail's slow circuit feels like attention paid to what is already close at hand.

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