Questions of identity — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

footself or waterself no other home

my ordinary hours as keeper of a place come to question me

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In just a few lines, Dave Bonta asks what it means to belong somewhere. The speaker offers two possible selves: a "footself," the one who walks the land, and a "waterself," the one tied to water. Both are rooted in the physical world, and the speaker says there is "no other home." Nothing else is on offer, no city self or office self, just these two ways of being in a place.

The second stanza turns the questioning around. The speaker thinks of themselves as a "keeper of a place," someone who looks after it through ordinary, everyday hours. Then those hours "come to question me." It's a quiet reversal: the one who watches over the place is now being watched, or judged, by the routine of caring for it. The speaker seems unsure, even a little humbled.

The mood is spare, thoughtful, and gently unsettled. Nothing is dramatic, yet the poem leaves you wondering whether belonging is something you claim or something that tests you.

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