Wake and break — Summary

up and to my lies the sad stuff of being

up and to discourse the matter with being gone

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Dave Bonta's poem is only a few lines long, but it carries a lot in its small space. It begins with the moment of waking, and the title, "Wake and break," suggests that coming to consciousness is also a kind of breaking. The speaker seems to rise "up and to" something, but what they find is "my lies" and "the sad stuff of being." The poem hints that the morning brings a reckoning: before the day gets going, there is an honest, unflattering look at oneself.

The second stanza repeats the pattern, "up and to discourse," as if the speaker is trying to talk their way through it. Yet what comes out is "the matter with being gone," a phrase that could point to loss, absence, or death, though the poem never says whose. That vagueness is part of its force.

The mood is quiet, tired, and a little raw. The clipped, repeated phrasing feels like someone stumbling through the first minutes of the day, unable to get past a sorrow they can name only in fragments.

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