Lazy dog’s lament — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

The busy ones the fast breeder reactors always amaze me:

the ermine’s slick white rope- trick of a body vanishing into the snow

a hummingbird threading the hundred eyes of a woodlot without slowing down

the manic shrew like a heat- seeking missile & yes the quick brown fox

ah I am nothing but a speed bump on a log a lazy dog

but I figure someone has to sit at the center of the maze they make.

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The speaker begins by admiring the fast, restless animals of the woods: an ermine that vanishes into snow, a hummingbird darting through the trees, a shrew that moves like a missile. There's even a wink at the old typing phrase about the quick brown fox. Calling them "fast breeder reactors" makes their energy sound almost dangerous, as if they can't stop burning.

Then the poem turns on itself. The speaker is a "speed bump on a log," a lazy dog, and the tone is half rueful, half playful. The final lines flip the complaint into a quiet defense: if all those creatures make a maze, someone has to sit at its center. Being still stops looking like a failure and starts to look like a role, maybe even a kind of balance. The mood is light and humorous, but it settles into calm, gentle self-acceptance.

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