Acting casual — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

might I people the street who am only one man

having nothing but a translation of a laugh

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Six short lines, no punctuation, no capital letters, and still the poem manages to hold an entire social predicament. Its title, "Acting casual," sets up a situation we all recognise: the effort to look relaxed in public while feeling anything but. What follows shows what that effort costs.

The speaker asks, or perhaps only wonders, whether he might "people the street." The verb is the first surprise. We normally say a crowd *fills* a street, but to "people" something is to populate it, to supply the people it lacks. The street, then, begins as empty, or at least feels empty, and the speaker is wondering whether he can fix that. The next line answers him before he finishes: he is "only one man." The word "only" carries the poem's weight. It admits a shortfall between what the scene demands, a street full of easy, ordinary human traffic, and what he can offer, which is himself, alone.

The diction matters here too. "Might I" is old-fashioned, polite, almost courtly, and "who am only one man" uses the formal first-person verb where everyday speech would slide into something looser. That sets up an irony the title has already planted. The speaker is trying to act casual, yet his language is stiff and careful, like someone rehearsing a line before saying it aloud. Nothing about the phrasing is relaxed, and the reader may sense that the speaker knows it.

The second couplet gives us his entire stock of resources: "nothing but a translation / of a laugh." This is the strangest image in the poem. A laugh is about as spontaneous as human sound gets, and it is exactly what a person at ease in a crowd would produce without thinking. A *translation* of a laugh is something else, a laugh carried over from one medium into another, with the usual loss that translation involves. It suggests a laugh that has been worked out and reconstructed rather than felt, the social sound he has learned to produce rather than the one that bubbles up. The speaker may be faking it, or he may simply be unable to reach the original. Either way, "acting casual" turns out to mean performing from a script.

The poem's shape reinforces this. Counting syllables, the first couplet is balanced: "might I people the street" and "who am only one man" each run to six. The second couplet breaks that symmetry. "Having nothing but a translation" stretches to nine, and then "of a laugh" shrinks to three. The poem ends on its smallest line, a laugh that barely gets going. There is no rhyme to give a sense of closure, and with no full stop the thought simply trails off, as if the speaker has run out of material. The "n" sounds in "only," "one," "man," "nothing" and "translation" hum quietly through the lines, while "laugh" ends in a breathy exhale, so the last word gives the faintest sound of a laugh without being one.

There is a second way to read the poem, which I offer as an inference rather than something the text states. To "people" a place and to "translate" are both things writers do. A poet is also one person who must populate a page with voices and feeling using only language, which is always a translation of experience. On that reading, "acting casual" describes the writer's pose as well as the stranger's, and the "translation of a laugh" is what a poem can offer in place of the real thing.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it leaves unexplained while still being exact. We never learn why the street feels empty or who the speaker is. We get an image of one person standing in public and trying to make himself enough, and an admission that his main tool is imitation. The poem is also itself a small, one-voice thing, trying to fill a space with very little, which is the situation it describes. That match between form and subject is why a few lines stay in the mind long after a longer poem might fade.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Plea bargain

I hear half a beat of drum to serve time have half a hope in the meantime praise God
DreamyDave Bonta

Cibola 3

I awake in the dark and shake free of sheets & blankets, of down-filled quilt. The rituals of waking– the long, hot shower, the coffee–give
ContemplativeDave Bonta

In good light

On a maple’s pale bark, a zigzag ladder—old tooth-marks from a wandering snail? Green islands of moss