Tunnel Vision — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

The trail is a straight tunnel through dripping woods. In last night’s dream, I’d been ready to cross a mountain where roads & trails hadn’t yet been thought of, not even by the animals. On the far side, my brothers had found another hollow parallel to this one, where riotous growth pressed against the windowpanes & light-starved houseplants rotted in their pots. But this morning, the trail ends as always at the crest of a ridge a-bristle with dying laurel bushes & brown & yellow bracken. The valley full of fog glows in the weak sunlight like the belly of a carp. The woods are silent except for the patter of urine where a deer grazes, her pelt already quivering under the feet of her daily flies. The camera around my neck travels the length of the trail in both directions, far heavier than its credit card-sized counterpart in the dream, & just as empty.

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A man walks a familiar trail through wet woods, still carrying the memory of a dream. In the dream, he was about to cross an untouched mountain, beyond which his brothers had found a second hollow, wild and overgrown, where even the houseplants were suffocating in their abundance. It's strange but full of possibility. The waking world offers none of that. The trail ends where it always does, at a ridge of dying laurel and brown bracken, and the fog-filled valley glows dully, like a fish's belly.

The details turn quietly grim: a deer urinating in the silence, flies already settling on her pelt as if she were half decayed. The speaker feels flat and a little trapped, a sense the title's "tunnel vision" captures. The ending hits hardest. His camera is heavy, while the dream's version was tiny, and both are "empty." The mood is muted and deflated, a longing for mystery that the ordinary morning can't satisfy.

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