Intronaut — Summary

my place is not a place I have directions

to make a blue room in my mind

in hopes to find an upper night

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

The speaker begins with a puzzle: "my place is not a place." Home, here, isn't somewhere you can point to on a map. Yet the next line adds, almost calmly, "I have directions." So there is a way to get there, even if the destination isn't physical. The directions turn out to be an act of imagination: making "a blue room / in my mind."

The title, "Intronaut," seems to be a coined word suggesting someone who travels inward, the way an astronaut travels outward. That fits the poem's movement. The speaker isn't escaping to another location but building one, and hoping it leads somewhere higher: "an upper night."

The mood is quiet and hushed, with a gentle longing. Blue suggests calm, or perhaps sadness, and the phrase "in hopes" admits nothing is guaranteed. The speaker sounds like someone searching, patient and a little uncertain, for peace or wonder inside their own head.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Plea bargain

I hear half a beat of drum to serve time have half a hope in the meantime praise God
DreamyDave Bonta

Cibola 3

I awake in the dark and shake free of sheets & blankets, of down-filled quilt. The rituals of waking– the long, hot shower, the coffee–give
ContemplativeDave Bonta

In good light

On a maple’s pale bark, a zigzag ladder—old tooth-marks from a wandering snail? Green islands of moss