The last shall be first — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

suppose one evening the world ends

like a sweet which I now possess

from the backwardness of I know not what god

as far as my eyes will give me leave

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Suppose the end of the world were not a catastrophe but a sweet. That is the odd proposal in Dave Bonta's eight short lines, and the oddness is the point. The poem takes the biggest event we can imagine and shrinks it until it fits inside a mouth. Its central idea is that the ending, whatever form it takes, is already something the speaker holds. "A sweet / which I now possess" puts the end of everything in the present tense and in the speaker's own hand.

The poem is a single sentence with no punctuation and no capitals, laid out in four two-line stanzas. Nothing rhymes, and the lines are short, between three and six syllables. The effect is of someone thinking aloud, quietly, trying a thought for the first time. The line breaks do much of the work. "The world ends" stops cold at the end of a line, so for a moment the ending is absolute. Then the next line adds "like a sweet," and the sentence swerves from doom into something almost childlike. Because "sweet" can also be an adjective, the break lets us hear a faint "ends sweetly" before the noun settles in. A sweet is also something that dissolves. Judging by the imagery, the world is imagined melting away on the tongue, slowly and pleasurably, rather than being smashed.

The sound of the poem supports this. The first stanza's "suppose" and the second's "possess" share the same sounds, so the hypothetical and the held are linked. What we only suppose might already be in our possession. Soft s-sounds run through "suppose," "sweet," "possess" and "eyes," giving the poem a hushed, sucking texture, like a sweet being turned over in the mouth.

The title adds a second layer. "The last shall be first" is a saying from the Gospels about the reversal of ranks, where those at the back of the line move to the front. Bonta carries that reversal into the poem. The end of the world, the last thing imaginable, comes first, as the opening word's supposition. Then the third stanza names the principle outright: "from the backwardness / of I know not what god." "Backwardness" turns the title's idea into a noun, and it is a lovely, slightly comic word for a deity's way of working. It can mean a god who does things in reverse, or one who is rustic and unpolished, or one who is simply facing the wrong way. The speaker does not claim to know which god, or whether there is one: "I know not what god." The phrase has the ring of an old formula, a shrug that is also a kind of prayer. The poem wants to imagine the end, but it admits it cannot know where the end comes from.

That humility is sharpest in the last stanza. "As far as my eyes / will give me leave" sets the limit of the speaker's vision as the limit of the whole vision. We see the end only as far as our eyes allow, and the eyes seem to be doing the allowing, as if they were a kind of authority. "Leave" carries two meanings at once. It is permission, and it is departure, the thing the world is doing in the poem. The pun arrives in the final word, so the poem ends on a double sense of going.

The missing full stop matters too. The world ends in the poem's first sentence, but the sentence itself never closes. It trails off at the edge of sight, leaving the reader inside the supposition rather than after it.

The poem is significant because it manages a large subject without grandeur. There are no fires, trumpets or judgments, only a small sensory comparison, a god who is not even named, and a speaker who confesses the limits of his seeing. By refusing to pretend to knowledge, it makes the end of the world feel less like a prophecy and more like a private act of attention. We are asked not to fear the ending but to hold it, as we would hold a sweet, for as long as our eyes allow.

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