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Dave BontaRomantic

the first time we touch is a banquet for hands

within an egg the light is beautiful as a bruise

and we could go play at another door

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Dave Bonta's short poem is about the first moment of touching someone, and how overwhelming it feels. The opening image says it best: hands, usually plain tools, suddenly sit down to a feast. Every sense of skin is awake, hungry and delighted at once.

The second stanza turns stranger. The light "within an egg" suggests something enclosed and fragile, a private world just beginning. Calling that light "beautiful as a bruise" mixes tenderness with a hint of hurt, as if intense closeness can be lovely and slightly painful together. The poem doesn't explain this, which is part of its charm.

The ending is lighter and more playful. "We could go play / at another door" feels like a shrug and an invitation, as though the speaker is ready to wander off with this person and keep exploring. The mood is hushed, curious and a little giddy, with a quiet awareness that new intimacy is both delicate and exciting.

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