October dusk — Summary

What do you mean by knife, by wind? The bluest sky below the wash of sunset pink, delectable as a slice of blue fruit riding the horizon’s blade. Half a moon over the barn. The field of goldenrod fuzz gathering its sparrows, brown into brown, poor Sam Peabody as lamentable as ever: a song that catches in the middle like a shirt on a thorn. The wind dying, & the color in the trees darkening like dried blood.

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The speaker watches a rural October evening settle in, and the poem moves the way the eye does, picking out one thing after another. It opens with an odd question, "What do you mean / by knife, by wind?", as if the speaker is puzzling over the words themselves. The knife comes back a few lines later, when the horizon becomes a blade and the blue sky a slice of fruit riding along it. The image is sharp but also oddly tasty, "delectable."

Then the view widens to a half moon over a barn, and a field of goldenrod full of sparrows blending "brown into brown." "Poor Sam Peabody" seems to be a bird's call, heard as a faltering song that "catches in the middle / like a shirt on a thorn." That is the poem's most tender, slightly comic moment.

The mood is quiet, observant, and a little melancholy. As the wind drops, the colors darken "like dried blood," a final image that is beautiful and faintly ominous, as though the day has been wounded and is now going still.

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