Leaf Peeps — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

My friend Jesús has a glass paperweight in the shape of a mountain with one red maple leaf trapped inside. Jesús, I say, what do you need a paperweight for? You have no papers. He frowns, then smiles. Sometimes I bring the mountain to Mohammed across the hall, he says. We think it’s funny.

I take both of them on a ride in the country to look at the leaves. They keep asking things I don’t know the answer to. Which tree is that? Why is that flower blooming now? Jesus Christ, I say. Can’t you just look & enjoy? But no, they keep hollering to pull over. I take their pictures with cows, with a Dairy-Treat sign, & with a chainsaw-sculpted Indian. This looks like my friend Pedro, says Jesús. He’s still in Michoacán, sleeping with all our wives. I’ll make the print into a postcard that says, Wish you were here. Mohammed laughs harder than I’ve ever seen him.

They’re both familiar with chainsaws—I’m disappointed. It’s the one thing I know: those whirling teeth, their hungry search.

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Anyone who has heard the slang "leaf peeper," a tourist who drives out to gawk at autumn foliage, will see the joke in Dave Bonta's title. The speaker is a leaf peeper, a driver and self-appointed guide, who gradually discovers that he is the least equipped person in the car. What begins as a small comedy about a day trip turns into a quiet study of who gets to be the expert, and of how people turn places into souvenirs.

The opening image sets the pattern. Jesús owns a glass paperweight shaped like a mountain, with "one red / maple leaf trapped inside." It is nature shrunk, sealed and made portable. The jokes that follow all play on moving things around: "Sometimes I bring / the mountain to Mohammed," Jesús says, reversing the old proverb about the mountain and the prophet. The speaker's own gag, "You have / no papers," lands because of the line break, which makes "no papers" arrive as a small shock. The word could mean documents to be weighted down, but it could also mean immigration papers. That second reading is an inference, but the poem seems to invite it, since Jesús "frowns, / then smiles" before answering. Then comes a telling sentence: "We think it's funny." The "we" appears to be Jesús and Mohammed, so the speaker is already standing outside their joke.

The drive reverses the speaker's expectations. He plays host, but his passengers keep asking "things I don't know the answer to": which tree, why that flower is blooming now. His reply, "Jesus Christ… Can't you / just look & enjoy?", is funny because he is the one who has framed the whole outing as looking. They are curious, and he mistakes their curiosity for fussing. He also swears by the very name his friend carries, though in English, and the poem never comments on it. Meanwhile the photographs repeat the paperweight's logic of trapping a moment in a frame. The speaker poses his friends with cows, a Dairy-Treat sign and a "chainsaw-sculpted Indian," a roadside figure carved from a tree. Jesús says it looks like his friend Pedro, "still in Michoacán, / sleeping with all our wives." The joke ties the kitsch statue to home, and the speaker's plan for the picture, a postcard reading "Wish you were here," treats the gag as a souvenir too. Mohammed's laughter, "harder / than I've ever seen him," is the warmest moment in the poem, and it comes from a joke the speaker did not write.

The form suits this offhand tone. There is no rhyme and no regular meter. Speech runs straight into narration without quotation marks, so the poem reads like an anecdote told aloud. The ampersands ("look & enjoy," "Dairy-Treat sign, &") add a casual, scribbled feel. The stanzas are lopsided: eleven lines for the paperweight, twenty for the drive, then a coda of only four. Enjambment keeps shifting emphasis, as with "red / maple leaf," which isolates the colour, and "Which tree is that? Why / is that flower blooming now?", which leaves a question hanging at the line's edge.

The short last stanza changes the mood: "They're both familiar with / chainsaws—I'm disappointed. / It's the one thing I know." The speaker has lost his last claim to authority. Then the language darkens: "those whirling teeth, / their hungry search." The machine suddenly seems alive and predatory, and it is the tool that made the Indian statue and turned a living tree into a roadside attraction. Behind the cute souvenirs, the poem hints, lies cutting and shaping, and it implies that the two friends know that side of the work better than the man holding the camera. Judging by the ending, they may know it from experience, though the poem never says how.

The poem is significant because it avoids the usual reverent nature poem. Its autumn is full of cows, ice-cream signs and carved wood, and its real subject is the gap between looking at the world and understanding it. The speaker's own confidence comes out as the most trapped thing in the poem, caught like the leaf in the glass.

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