Starflower — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

Trientalis borealis

Seven stamens twist like one-legged strangers at a station, anxious to avoid each other’s gaze.

The train hasn’t come, might never come. The snow gives off a radiance like a face at the bottom of a well.

The platform shakes on its slender stalk. We are in this together, & the stars are closer than we think.

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Dave Bonta's poem starts with a small woodland flower, the starflower, and turns it into a scene of people waiting at a station. The seven stamens become strangers, twisting awkwardly and avoiding each other's eyes. It's a funny, slightly uncomfortable picture, and it makes the flower feel oddly human.

The mood shifts in the second stanza. The train may never arrive, and the snow glows eerily, "like a face at the bottom of a well." There's loneliness here, and a sense of being stuck in limbo.

But the ending softens things. The platform trembles on its thin stalk, which reminds us we're still inside the flower, something delicate and small. Then the speaker says "We are in this together," and the strangers become a "we." The final line, that the stars are closer than we think, leaves a quiet hope. The poem moves from isolation and anxiety toward a fragile sense of connection and wonder.

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