Horror Fictions — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

At some point in every horror film comes the line: It’s alive! Is this the way the dead feel when we disturb their rest with our roots & our pickaxes, our squirming purple larvae & our blind snouts? We are the zero in their bones, that slick thick marrow, mother of blood. We are their unlucky rabbits’ feet, the throw of their dice. We creep & crawl. We erupt, dangerous as magma. Someday the sun will bring us all together, living & dead, in one molten paroxysm, but until then we can meet only in the briefest of spasms, & are listed together in the credits for moan, rattle & almost imperceptible sigh.

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Bonta starts with a horror-movie cliché, the moment someone shouts "It's alive!", and then flips it. What if the dead feel that same shock when we, the living, disturb them? The speaker imagines us from below the ground: roots, pickaxes, larvae and blind snouts pushing into their rest. We become the monsters, "dangerous as magma," creeping and crawling into a place where we don't belong.

The tone is darkly playful but also strangely tender. The speaker doesn't seem frightened so much as fascinated by how living and dead depend on each other. We are the "zero in their bones" and the "throw of their dice," a kind of bad luck and a kind of chance at once. The ending moves toward something quieter. Until the sun finally merges everyone, we meet only in brief "spasms." The closing image of film credits, listing "moan, rattle / & almost imperceptible sigh," leaves a mood that is eerie, wry, and oddly gentle.

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