Extremophile — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

How many miles into the earth would we have to dig to find true stillness, free from all taint of life? Some bacteria can thrive solely on the energy from radioactive decay, know nothing of oxygen, & persist as a single-species ecosystem, alone in their subterranean cosmos. We’ve come to learn a full half of the total mass of life on earth dwells underground or beneath the ocean floor. So thoroughly have we infected the planet, it might never be rid of us, the poor thing, burdened as it is with a barren mate that remains untainted by its contagion, circling at a safe distance & summoning with a regular tug that we like to think is somehow meant for us.

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Dave Bonta's speaker opens with a fantasy of escape. How far down would we have to go to reach "true stillness, / free from all taint of life"? The word "taint" is the first surprise, because it treats life as a stain on the world rather than its glory. The second surprise is that the poem never answers the question. It swerves into bacteria that "thrive solely / on the energy from radioactive decay" and "know nothing of oxygen." The title word, *extremophile*, means an organism that flourishes where we would expect nothing to survive. The poem uses it to take the floor out from under the speaker's wish. Dig as deep as you like and something is already down there.

The details in the middle are small and strange. A "single-species ecosystem" is almost a contradiction, since an ecosystem usually implies many creatures depending on one another. Here one kind of microbe is both the whole community and its own entire world, "alone in their subterranean cosmos." Putting "cosmos" inside solid rock makes the dark underground feel as vast as space. The phrase "know nothing of oxygen" is gently comic, a little personification that makes the bacteria sound like hermits who have never heard of the thing we think life requires. Then comes a flat, report-like sentence: "We've come to learn a full half / of the total mass of life on earth / dwells underground or beneath / the ocean floor." The plain tone makes the fact more startling.

Then the poem turns on a single word, "infected." The planet becomes a patient and life becomes a disease: "So thoroughly have / we infected the planet, it might / never be rid of us, the poor thing." The "poor thing" is tender and slightly mocking at once, the way you might talk about a sick relative. It is worth noticing how the "we" stretches. It begins with the diggers, then seems to mean humanity, yet the evidence just offered is about buried microbes. The speaker seems to fold all living things into one guilty crowd, or perhaps is teasing us for taking credit for an infestation far older and deeper than ourselves.

The last movement leaves Earth for its "barren mate." The moon is never named, but "circling," "safe distance," and "regular tug" all point to it, so the poem hands us a riddle and lets us enjoy solving it. The marriage metaphor is carefully kept up. The moon stays "untainted by its contagion," like a spouse who stands outside the sickroom door. The only true stillness the poem finds is therefore not under our feet at all. It belongs to a dead world we cannot dig to.

The form supports all this quietly. The poem is a single block of twenty lines with no rhyme and no regular beat, and it moves like thinking aloud. The opening question takes three lines, and the sentences grow longer and more tangled as the speaker warms to the idea. The line breaks often plant a small doubt. "It might" hangs at the end of one line, sounding like hope, before "never be rid of us" arrives at the start of the next. The two ampersands ("know nothing of oxygen, & persist"; "& summoning") give a casual, jotted-down feel, as if this were a thought caught in a notebook rather than a speech.

The ending is where the poem lands its sharpest point. The moon's pull is "regular," a matter of mechanics, yet "we like to think" it is "somehow / meant for us." The final line is only three words, and it deflates us. After the poem has shown life crammed into every crack of the planet, we are still the creatures who hear a call in plain gravity.

That is the poem's real significance. It takes a piece of modern science, that life is far more widespread and tenacious than we imagined, and turns it into a lesson in humility and a joke at our expense. The usual worry is that we might be alone in the universe. Bonta suggests the opposite problem, that life is so unavoidable we cannot find a corner of our own world without it, and we still believe the universe is addressing us personally.

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