Heat Indices — Poem analysis

Bombs go off right across the world from where I live, among a people who look like me. This is news because they are not at war — or at least, not very much — & because they look just like me. Meanwhile in America we are blowing up mountains & burning their black hearts to keep cool. Meanwhile in America we are setting off three & a half million pounds of explosives every day in this undeclared war against ourselves. This is not news because it happens every day & is therefore nothing new; because there is no easy- to-tar enemy except perhaps for the black-hearted mountains; & because the people who die from it die slowly & unspectacularly, & are too often guilty of being poor. Meanwhile in America it is hot & getting hotter, & this is news because it keeps us indoors, glued to the news or at least to the sweat- sticky couch. Meanwhile in America the news anchors make a show of indignation at the sun, righteous & well-coiffed as fallen angels, & never speculate about why we might really be so hot, never mention that we are blowing up mountains & burning their black hearts to keep cool.

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A bomb on the far side of the world makes the headlines. A mountain blown apart at home does not. Dave Bonta's "Heat Indices" starts from that mismatch and turns it into an accusation. The speaker admits that distant explosions count as news partly because the victims "look just like me." Meanwhile, Americans are "setting off / three & a half million pounds of explosives / every day" in what the poem calls an "undeclared war / against ourselves," and no one reports it. The central idea is that what we call news is shaped by familiarity, spectacle and comfort, and the same habits keep us from seeing how we are heating our own world.

The argument is built from a simple, repeated grammar. The poem sets "This is news because" against "This is not news because," and the reasons it gives are quietly damning. Bombs are news because of resemblance. Mountain-blasting is not news because "it happens every day & is therefore / nothing new," because there is no "easy-to-tar enemy," and because the victims "die slowly & unspectacularly, / & are too often guilty of being poor." That last phrase is bitterly ironic, since poverty is treated as a crime the dead have committed. Even the hedge "or at least, / not very much" in the first lines shows a speaker who is careful and honest, and that makes his anger more convincing.

The imagery is compact and carries a lot. The poem never names coal, but "burning their black hearts" suggests it, and "blowing up mountains" points toward mining that removes the mountain itself. Judging by the imagery, the heart is both the coal inside the mountain and a moral idea. When the poem later calls the mountains "black-hearted," it mocks the way a culture can blame the victim and cast the land as the villain. "Easy-to-tar" adds a pun, since tar is a sticky black residue, and the hyphenated word breaks across a line as if it were being stretched. The poem's cruelest irony is a loop. We burn the mountains "to keep cool," yet the burning helps make it "hot / & getting hotter." The cure and the disease are the same thing.

The news anchors get the poem's sharpest simile. They are "righteous / & well-coiffed as fallen angels," and the indignation they stage is aimed at "the sun," as if weather were a personal offence. The comparison gives them glamour and a hint of damnation, and fallen angels are also linked with fire. Viewers fare no better. The heat keeps them "glued / to the news or at least to the sweat- / sticky couch," and the glue and sweat make the audience physically stuck. Their passivity becomes part of the problem.

Formally, the poem is free verse with no rhyme, and it runs as one unbroken block with no stanza breaks. That gives it the feel of a relentless broadcast or a heat with no relief. The sentences are conversational but the line breaks are tricky. "Among a people who / look like me" hangs on the word "who" for a moment, and the breaks inside "easy- / to-tar" and "sweat- / sticky" make the reader stumble in the same way. The ampersands make the voice hurried and offhand, as if the speaker had no time to waste on formal spelling. Sound does some work too. "Bombs" at the opening is echoed in the heavy b's of "blowing," "burning" and "black," so the central crime sounds like the explosions it describes.

The most striking technique is the repetition. "Meanwhile in America" returns again and again like a news segment's stock phrase, and the line about blowing up mountains and burning "their black hearts to keep cool" appears once in the middle and again as the poem's last words. The speaker complains that the anchors "never mention" it, and then he mentions it twice, and the second time it is the last thing we hear. The poem ends up doing the job the news will not.

That is where its significance lies. It does not lecture or offer solutions. It points the media's own habits back at the audience and includes the speaker in the guilt, since the "we" does the blowing up and the burning. After reading it, a weather report looks different, because the question is no longer only how hot it is but who is paying to keep us cool.

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