This poem has nothing to do with 9/11. — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

There are no planes or denunciations in it, nothing combustible, no flags or falling bodies, no twisted I-beams or pacifist cris de coeur. In this poem, we are eating soup, & the radio is off as it always is during meals. Nobody calls to tell us to tune in. We are for the most part ignoring the extraordinary events taking place all around us in field & woodlot, in the air & soil & water from which we are knit. The soup is hot, & so good. I dip my bread in it, extending its dominion. When the bread is gone, I lift the bowl to my lips & slurp as I learned to do years ago in Japan. My father will wash the dishes. We will each slice open & remove the inedible stone from a dead-ripe peach.

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The epigraph says the poem has nothing to do with 9/11, and then the poem spends its first lines listing what it leaves out: planes, flags, falling bodies, protest. By naming them, it keeps them in the room. That's the trick. The poem is about a tragedy by insisting on its absence.

What it offers instead is an ordinary meal. The speaker and his father eat soup with the radio off, as always. The speaker dips bread, slurps from the bowl, and notes that the soup is "hot, & so good." The attention is gentle and sensual. Meanwhile, the poem points to the "extraordinary events" of the natural world, in field, woodlot, air, soil, and water, which we are "knit" from.

The mood is calm, a little stubborn, and quietly grateful. The speaker doesn't dismiss the news so much as choose to notice what's close at hand. The final image, removing the stone from a ripe peach, feels both tender and slightly sobering.

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