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Dave BontaContemplative

blossoming witch hazel I pound a stuck storm window with a Chinese dictionary

red-spotted newt even on land it still steers with its tail

where it lost a limb a glimpse of twisted heartwood mosquito in my ear

old bolete gnats follow the branching cracks in its skin

first rain in weeks the dry canyons in my moss garden disappear

night-blooming cereus two spiders feed on a white moth

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These six haiku read like quick entries in a nature journal, each catching a single moment outdoors or close to home. The speaker pays attention to small things: a newt, a mushroom, a moth, a patch of moss. Some images are gentle, like the rain that makes the "dry canyons" of a moss garden vanish, as if a tiny landscape had been given back its water. Others are quietly harsh, like the two spiders feeding on a white moth under the night-blooming flower.

The poems also have a dry sense of humor. Pounding a stuck window with a Chinese dictionary is a funny, ordinary scene set against the blossoming witch hazel. The mosquito in the ear interrupts a thoughtful look at twisted heartwood, so beauty and annoyance share the same breath.

The mood is curious, observant, and unsentimental. The speaker doesn't lecture about nature. He simply notices that life, death, repair, and irritation all happen side by side, often at a very small scale.

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