«We entered the world…» — Summary

We entered the world

gun – fire – work, metal, burning, bleeding.

we, born screaming keep our mouths shut (our mothers safe) we fear a fire bodies scorched

to quiet rage is to die without grave another corpse unnamed

we fear a fire we, already alight not the soot, but the ash: rise, rise afraid, a blaze.

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Mai's poem begins with a blunt claim: the speakers "entered the world" already surrounded by violence, a place of guns, fire, metal, burning and bleeding. Babies are born screaming, but here the voices learn to go quiet. The speakers keep their mouths shut, and the bracketed line "(our mothers safe)" suggests silence is a form of protection, a trade made out of love and fear.

But the poem doesn't treat that silence as peace. It says that to quiet rage is "to die without grave," to become "another corpse unnamed." Keeping quiet may keep you alive, yet it also erases you. The speaker feels trapped between two fears, and that is why "we fear a fire" comes back twice.

The ending shifts. The speakers are "already alight," and the repeated "rise, rise" reads like a pulse of defiance, though it still ends on "afraid, a blaze." The mood is tense, angry and uneasy, with fear and courage burning together.

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