A Love — Summary

It's sometimes hard to put feelings into explanation when I look at you I feel an odd sensation

My heart beats faster stupid words slip tickling arms my stomach makes a flip

Is this real or fake I want to be with you but this feels like it's too good to be true

I get nervous when I hear your name I want to watch a movie with you with thunderstorms and rain

I hope you mean it when you say you love me I hope I can be myself with you because that's what I want to be

But I want to be more to you than just a friend I don't know what to feel can you lend me a hand

Yes, I have been broken can you fix it or will you break me further or will you keep this fire lit

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Dominic Black's "A Love" captures the dizzy early days of falling for someone. The speaker struggles to put the feeling into words, and the poem shows it instead through small physical details: a racing heart, tingling arms, a flipping stomach. Even hearing the person's name makes them nervous, and they imagine a cozy movie night with thunderstorms and rain.

Under the excitement sits doubt. The speaker wonders whether this is real or "too good to be true," hopes the other person means "I love you," and wants to be themselves without pretending. They also want to be more than just a friend, yet admit they don't know what to feel. The last stanza is the most vulnerable. The speaker says they have been broken before and asks whether this person will fix them, hurt them more, or keep the "fire lit." The mood is tender and nervous, mixing joy with fear of getting hurt again.

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