the girl — Summary

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In my old town there was a girl, She dropped seeds everywhere she went, While all the boys carved out their names, In any patch of wet cement, They'd laugh at her and tell her, She would never make a mark, If all she left behind her, Were some falling leaves and bark, So I wonder if they've been back, Since we grew and left that place, Or if they still all carry markers, In their pockets just in case, Because I'd love to see their faces, If I told them what I've seen, That the streets where we once played, Now drown beneath a sea of green, And their names scratched on the sidewalk, Weren't as eternal as they'd planned, For in the place where they once wrote them, An endless forest proudly stands, Would they tell that girl they're sorry, If they ever had the choice, For not knowing those worth hearing, Don't always have the loudest voice? That in the future all the things we do, Will still have an effect, And that sometimes those who change the world, Are those you least expect.

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The speaker remembers a girl from their old town who scattered seeds wherever she went, while the boys carved their names into wet cement. The boys mocked her, saying she'd never leave a mark if all she left behind was leaves and bark.

Years later, the speaker wonders about those boys and imagines showing them what happened. The streets where they played are now buried under green, and an endless forest stands where their names were scratched. Their marks, meant to last forever, are gone, while the girl's quiet work grew into something huge.

The mood is gently triumphant, with a little wry satisfaction in it. The speaker clearly admires the girl and wishes the boys could see their mistake. The closing lines state the message plainly: the loudest people aren't always the ones worth hearing, and the people who change the world are often the ones you least expect.

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