Scattered Gutters — Summary

DulukRomantic

Variation on a familiar theme

And the sun stretched forth his orange-yellow hand, and groomed the city streets, and followed the country roads, and even scanned the island retreats for the slender hand he so longed to hold; and finding none of his desired worth strolling through the day, He reclined - to reflect on Cabernet, and determined to assign his son the task; the son, who with his father’s borrowed light patrols the undeserted streets at night;

And through the dank alleyways of beer-glass broken gutters, his pale arm crept softly over our simple heads, and under concrete bridges and over cardboard beds, in over-populated three-in-the-morning bars, and theatres filled with song and dance and weeping bards - he filtered through those sound awake and sleeping to find the earthy hand his father now desired instead of the emaciated sky; but nothing here on earth - and nothing through the sea could be gathered to compare with her infinitely finite blue supply of cloud-swept grace and star-borne flare.

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The poem turns the sun and moon into a father and son. The sun spends the day searching cities, country roads and islands for a "slender hand" to hold, and finds nothing worth his longing. Disappointed, he sits back with a glass of Cabernet and sends his son, the moon, to search at night using borrowed light.

The moon's search is the more earthy one. He drifts through broken-glass alleys, under bridges, past cardboard beds, into crowded bars and theatres full of song. Still, nothing on earth or in the sea compares to the sky itself, with its "cloud-swept grace and star-borne flare."

The tone is playful but wistful. The speaker seems to look on humanity with some affection and some sadness, since the city's lonelier corners are lit up and then found lacking. The ending suggests that what the sun truly wants is already above us, and perhaps that we overlook our own beauty. The mood is dreamy, a little melancholy, and gently ironic.

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