December Rose — Summary

DulukDreamy

I

nevermind the lofty faces that you meet the faces that you nod to quickly on the street

recall....the dance of the yellow-jacket’s ritual around the nipples of the honey-suckle stems; the nights her pants would lie beside your bed; songs of birds singing well past breakfast - her leg around your waist, arm across your chest: recall the plaintive face staring out your window and sighing - for another breath to relieve her of the strain from more uncertainty.

II

below the afternoon bridges, under a street-lamp flickering and unstable - I swallow the crisp dusk air and watch the violet sunset recline into a cloudy chamber of forgotten repose; while she returns a letter written by her abstruse young friend - (my irreverent brother) when the seasons were less cruel: but forgiving in quiet December evening snows; when the mornings were less forced: resolving themselves in capitulated scenarios

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The speaker is caught in memory, and the poem moves between two kinds of looking back. In the first section, a voice, perhaps the speaker talking to himself, tells someone to ignore the stiff, distant faces of the street and recall something more intimate: bees at the honeysuckle, a lover's clothes beside the bed, birdsong late into the morning, her leg and arm wrapped around him. But even this tenderness carries unease. The woman at the window looks plaintive, sighing for relief from "more uncertainty."

The second section shifts to an evening of cold dusk air and a flickering street-lamp. The speaker watches a violet sunset fade while she returns a letter from his brother. The poem suggests that the relationship has ended or is slipping away. December, once gentle with snow, is now described as cruel, and the mornings feel forced. The mood is wistful and quietly sad, with sensual memory set against a colder, more resigned present.

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