Rainbow Around the Moon — Summary

Ebonee GraceContemplative

I stand quietly in the middle of the world I look up to see the moon A dusty ring is around it If only I could capture to share Share this moment with a future someone The cold bites me through my jacket Yet I stay I can hear the horn of the train The circle reminds me of a full rainbow I think I can see hints of color in it An unimportant moment at 1:45 am Yet it helps restore my soul I shall go in before I freeze

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

A speaker stands outside in the middle of the night, looking up at the moon and noticing a dusty ring around it. The scene is simple, but the speaker is clearly moved. They wish they could capture the sight and share it with "a future someone," which suggests a longing to connect with another person, even one who doesn't exist yet.

The cold bites through the jacket, and a train horn sounds in the distance, yet the speaker stays. The ring starts to look like a rainbow, with faint hints of color. The poem is honest about how small this is: an "unimportant moment at 1:45 am." Still, it "helps restore my soul," which shows how tiny, unplanned experiences can bring peace. The mood is calm, solitary and gently wondering. The last line, "I shall go in before I freeze," brings us back to ordinary life with a touch of humor.

Read also

More by Ebonee Grace

All poems
AngryEbonee Grace

My Anger

Why does my anger seemed to get reduced? Because I am woman I'm overreacting I'm at that time of the month
SadEbonee Grace

How Can I?

How can I write With no words? How can I sing With no voice?
SadEbonee Grace

Day 2: Monster

Many mothers have I Many lives I lived I did not ask for this existence People want me shivved