Old lightning — Summary

ElisabetaDreamy

I was walking one day, by a passing road. It was so shiny, so full of lights,

Just like I used to be before.

Step by step different memorable things I saw Until in that rusty bench I sat Differently from before...

Now It was just me, without that old feeling of getting sore

And the only thing that hadn't change at all, were the rusty bench and the lights on the road, were the irreplaceable memories from us on the way Of getting lighted by each other every day

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A speaker takes a walk along a road that once felt bright and alive, and the walk turns into a quiet look backward. The road is shiny and full of lights, and the speaker admits to having been that way too, "just like I used to be before." Now things are different. Sitting on a rusty bench, the speaker feels changed, no longer carrying the old feeling of being "sore," whether that means hurt, bitter, or restless.

The mood is gentle and wistful, with a trace of relief. The speaker isn't wallowing in loss, but notices what has stayed the same: the bench, the lights, and the memories of a shared past. The last lines suggest this was a relationship, perhaps romantic, in which two people "lighted" each other every day. That idea ties back to the title, "Old lightning." The glow is still there, but now it lives in memory, and the speaker seems to be at peace with that.

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