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Ernesto PriegoContemplative

Gloomy day. Ceaseless rain. Walk like a blue ghost, covered in a poncho: it makes you look like a tired,

retired superhero. The rabbits must be all hiding underground: they know better.

I go from one concrete building to the other, change titillating screens a million times.

The post office makes me wait and 68p go away on a piece of paper with the face of a future king.

The red totem is there, still, opening its mouth. It devours. We walk back with printed words on paper

in the bag. The words are there. The more I read them the more I feel like walking like a blue ghost under the rain. The rain stops

for a moment. Absolute peace. Only the sound of a computer, breathing.

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On a gloomy, rainy day, the speaker wanders through town in a poncho, joking that he looks like a tired, retired superhero. The tone is wry and a little weary. He moves between concrete buildings and glowing screens, then waits at the post office, where 68p buys a stamp bearing a future king's face. The red postbox becomes a "totem" with a mouth that devours the letters fed to it.

Back home, with printed words in the bag, he reads them and feels the pull to go back out and walk in the rain again. The poem doesn't say what the words are, though the title suggests something added afterward, an afterthought. The ending turns quiet: the rain pauses, and the only sound is "a computer, breathing." The mood is lonely but gentle, mixing dry humour with a moment of calm. That last image makes the machine feel almost alive, as if it were company.

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