Nero — Poem analysis

Ernesto PriegoContemplative

A cut-out frame opens up the microscopic universe to the point of bacteria and then

it’s all about the flow of oxygen coffee-grinding time, drop after drop dilluted into a black spot.

Why would anyone use paper scissors to slit open an old page: a moist yellowed paperback,

unread, like the ocean of hair at the end of a long day at the barber’s shop. It’s all about the square

figure of these doors, a single other poor soul doing the same thing you do everyday

which is the same thing he does everyday and then the breeze comes in from waters not here;

maybe a sign that gods do indeed exist.

What happens when someone crosses that door unknowingly of all those dead?

The frame has no border: it is itself the border.

Come on, step on it and feel the edge.

The world is suddenly not inside, not outside

the world exists because we stand.

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"A cut-out frame" is the first of several thresholds in Ernesto Priego's "Nero", and the poem keeps swapping one for another. The frame seems at first to be the opening of a microscope, since it lets in "the microscopic / universe to the point / of bacteria". By the next stanza we are somewhere humbler, grinding coffee, watching "drop after drop" dissolve "into a black spot". The title means "black" in Italian, and judging by the imagery it seems to point at that spot, a small dark patch that the poem peers into the way the opening peers at bacteria. The scale lurches from the invisible to the domestic, and the poem treats both as equally strange.

That habit of making the small enormous continues. A paperback is slit open with "paper scissors", and the unread book is compared to "the ocean / of hair at the end / of a long day at the barber's shop". The comparison is odd and memorable. Both are leftovers, things nobody looks at, yet the word "ocean" gives them depth. The scissors may also echo the "cut-out frame" of the opening, so that the act of cutting becomes a way of making a window. That is one reading, not something the poem says outright.

Meanwhile the speaker's voice stays casual and shrugging. "It's all about" appears twice, first for oxygen and coffee, then for "the square / figure of these doors", as if the poem keeps announcing the essence of things and then changing its mind. Routine is built into the syntax: "a single other poor soul / doing the same thing / you do everyday // which is the same thing / he does everyday". The sentence circles back on itself like a day repeating. Then "the breeze comes in / from waters not here", and the tone shifts. The poem allows itself a hedged, half-ironic belief: "maybe a sign that gods / do indeed exist."

There is no rhyme and no steady meter, only short, talky lines in free verse. The structure still matters. The first six stanzas are regular quatrains, and sentences spill over the gaps between them ("It's all about the square / figure of these doors"), so the eye falls through the white space as if passing through a doorway. After the gods, the stanzas shrink: a couplet, a quatrain, a couplet, then a single line, "The frame has no border: / it is itself the border." The form narrows to an edge, which is what the poem is about by then.

The turn comes with the question "What happens when / someone crosses / that door unknowingly / of all those dead?" The phrasing is knotty. It reads as a door belonging to the dead, so an ordinary entrance becomes a passage between worlds, and the person crossing does not even know it. The paradox of the frame that is its own border follows, and then the poem's only command, set on its own line: "Come on, step on it and feel the edge." Until now the poem has described, and here it dares the reader to act. The earlier "you" of the daily routine becomes someone invited to stand on the very line the poem has been circling.

The ending is quiet. "The world is suddenly / not inside, not outside", and the final sentence drops its capital letter: "the world exists because / we stand." The idea seems to be that a world needs a position to be seen from, and that standing, in a doorway, at a frame, on an edge, is what creates the difference between here and there. The lowercase makes this feel less like a pronouncement than a thought arriving late and settling.

What makes the poem worth reading is that it finds a threshold in the most worn-out material, a coffee stain, a barber's floor, a repeated chore. It never settles into doctrine. The gods are only "maybe", and the dead are a question. By making the reader step onto the edge, it suggests that the boundary between inside and outside, the living and the dead, the routine and the strange, is something we do by standing somewhere.

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