Another Place — Summary

Ernesto PriegoContemplative

What strikes us is the stillness.

It’s a common place: “above us only sky.” The beach just keeps on going: the sand shows the traces of a kid who scribbled “Poo!” inside playful speech balloons again, and again, and again. You have to stand there to understand. The men are stilll with their feet buried, they can’t smell but in the distance lookalikes copy them with tripods and lenses walking dogs, getting fit, there are no waves. Some tankers pass by slowly. The men are standing facing beyond, up straight, cold and covered in scars left by other living organisms. This is all about the tide and the wind, the expanse of land, the vastness of the sky. Here are the iron men, ageing monuments rooted to the landscape which is theirs, ghostly like people, but harder, alone amongst all the others, with chests and legs pierced by painful solid pipes, dreaming of one day reaching faraway lands. Instead they go farther, deeper, without moving. Eventually they drown. The next morning they are still at it, waiting for another day. Until a sea of time swallows them completely.

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The poem describes a wide, empty beach where a row of iron figures stand with their feet buried in the sand. The speaker begins with the stillness that strikes every visitor, then fills the scene with small, ordinary details: a child's scribbled "Poo!" in speech balloons, people walking dogs, tourists photographing the statues, tankers drifting past. The humour is gentle, but it sits beside something heavier.

The figures are "ageing monuments," scarred and pierced by pipes, longing, the speaker imagines, to reach faraway lands. Yet they only go "farther, deeper, / without moving," as the tide drowns them each day and returns them each morning. The final image of a "sea of time" swallowing them suggests that even monuments don't last.

The mood is quiet, patient and a little melancholy. The speaker seems moved by the figures' endurance, and also by their loneliness and the slow, certain way they are worn away.

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