«I want to give you…» — Summary

I want to give you a hug a kiss a dozen cookies and hopefully you'll return a smile "thanks" and a kiss back. even if they're all fake.

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The speaker begins with a list of generous gestures: a hug, a kiss, even a dozen cookies. It reads like someone eager to please, offering affection in every form they can think of. Then the poem turns to what they hope to get back: a smile, a "thanks," a kiss. The tone is hopeful, almost shy, until the final line drops the mood. "Even if they're all fake" tells us the speaker is ready to accept pretend affection rather than none at all.

That last line is what gives the poem its ache. The speaker isn't really bargaining for love, just for the look of it. The short, plain lines make the confession feel quiet and unguarded, as if the speaker is saying something they'd rather not admit. The mood is lonely and a little sad, but also painfully honest. The title, "escape_artist," hints that the speaker may be hiding behind this kind of giving, though the poem never says so directly.

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