risks — Poem analysis

escape_artistContemplative

when you think about it you shouldn't make risks and you shouldn't do what you want and maybe you just shouldn't "live life to the fullest" but honestly, if you don't, who will?

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"risks" sets a trap in its first line. "when you think about it" is how people begin a reasonable argument, the kind that ends with a sigh and a sensible conclusion. The speaker seems to deliver one: you shouldn't make risks, you shouldn't do what you want, maybe you shouldn't even "live life to the fullest." The three refusals grow in scale, from a single activity (risk), to desire itself (what you want), to living at full volume. The list escalates so smoothly that a reader can nod along before noticing how much is being given up. Five lines of caution are then overturned by three lines of something else.

The first half is built from repetition. "Shouldn't" appears three times, and each time it comes with the little connector "and," so the lines pile up like items in a lecture. Two small words soften the whole performance. "Maybe" and "just" ("maybe you just shouldn't") make the third refusal sound tired and offhand, as if the speaker can't be bothered to finish the argument. Even the phrasing is slightly off-balance. People normally *take* risks, but here you shouldn't *make* them. That odd verb turns risk into something manufactured, a thing you could choose not to build. It is also possible the choice is just how the speaker talks, but it fits the poem's sense of danger as something self-inflicted.

The quotation marks around "live life to the fullest" are the most revealing detail. They mark the phrase as a slogan, the sort found on posters and in yearbooks. By holding it at arm's length, the speaker admits how worn the phrase is. The poem is not naive about this. It knows the cliché is exhausted, and the rest of the poem has to decide whether anything is still alive underneath it.

The answer arrives with "but honestly," and the form changes to match. The lines shrink. "but honestly," is about four syllables, "if you don't," three, "who will?" two. After the longer, looser lines of the argument, the poem narrows to a point, like a sentence being pared down to the one thing the speaker means. The word "honestly" also reclassifies everything before it. The earlier lines were what you say when you are being clever or defensive, and this is what you say when you stop performing.

A quieter shift happens in the verbs. The poem moves from "shouldn't," a word of rules and advice, to "don't," a plain statement of fact, and finally to "will." "Should" is what other people tell you. "Will" works in two ways: it is the future tense, and it is also desire and determination. Asking "who will?" suggests that nobody else can do your living for you. If you step back from your own life out of caution, the life simply goes unlived. It is not handed to someone else.

The poem has no rhyme and almost no punctuation. It has no capital letters, no full stops, only two commas, a question mark, and the quotation marks. That absence makes it read like speech or a text message, a thought that hasn't been tidied up. Because the poem is not polished, its final turn feels like a real change of mind rather than a planned moral. The question mark is the only strong punctuation in the poem, and it falls on the last word.

The name attached to the poem is a handle, "escape_artist." We cannot know anything about the person behind it, but the name suits the text. The poem slips out of its own cautious logic the way an escape artist slips out of a locked box. Reading that connection is an inference, not a fact about the writer.

What makes "risks" worth reading is that it does not simply recommend bravery. It first argues the opposite case, and quite persuasively, then lets that case collapse on a single question. The final line can be read two ways. It can be an encouragement ("go on, someone has to") or a faintly weary challenge, almost a dare. That ambiguity keeps the poem from becoming another poster. It sets aside the slogan but keeps what the slogan was trying to say, and in eight short lines it reminds us that caution often sounds like wisdom while quietly costing us the life we were being careful with.

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