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Fallen angelContemplative

as I metamorph questions filled my heart and my mind and jewels filled my eyes I wanted an answer but all I'd get are sugar coated lies with a pinch of salt inside. maybe it could've been wrong I utter all the time; but it is never wrong lying just made it wrong. it could just have been a single drop of honey from your mouth at least it is sweet and true. I asked for an answer. a true answer. I could have accepted a dead bouquet of true words. do not think of me as a person who could not appreciate wilting flowers just because I am a such a bee in a form of a man

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The speaker is someone who has been lied to and is tired of it. Changing, or "metamorphing," brought a flood of questions and tears ("jewels filled my eyes"), but the only answers they received were "sugar coated lies with a pinch of salt." The sweetness hides something bitter.

The poem's central plea is simple: tell me the truth, even if it hurts. The speaker says a single drop of honest honey would be enough, and they would even accept "a dead bouquet of true words." That image suggests a truth that is ugly or past its prime but still real. They add that they can appreciate wilting flowers, and they describe themselves as "a bee in a form of a man." A bee knows flowers, so the speaker claims they can tell what is genuine.

The mood is hurt but dignified. There is disappointment and a little pleading, yet the speaker stays firm about wanting honesty over comfort. The title, "Fallen angel," hints at lost innocence, though the poem itself leaves that open.

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