If we gathered where we fit — Summary

Francis ScudellariSaturday, July 21, 2012Dreamy

We could gather together, kinked elbow to elbow, wiggly fingers snugly knotted (not the knot

of a smoothed-down board, the knot, all bumps and twists, we tied when we didn’t tie knots very well, but we tied them

close and tight), at the creek we call a brook to make it feel magical (that kind of magic where frogs speak their curses

before they splash off). We could gather there, and not speak the rathers we’ve used not to,

rathering not to be gathering, rathering not to see how we fit elbow to elbow, or how a creek isn’t any less magical than a brook.

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The speaker imagines a small, simple reunion: people standing close by a creek, elbows touching, fingers knotted together the way children tie knots, clumsy but tight. The creek is called a "brook" to make it feel magical, a playful bit of naming that the speaker clearly loves, right down to the frogs muttering curses before they splash away.

But the poem keeps circling a "rather." The speaker admits that "we" have often preferred not to gather, and not to notice how well they fit together. The invented verb "rathering" makes that avoidance sound almost like a habit or a game, though it hints at something sadder underneath. The word "could" repeats like a quiet invitation.

The mood is tender, wistful and gently humorous. By the end, the speaker suggests that a creek is just as magical as a brook, which feels like a hope that ordinary closeness is already enough, if people would only let themselves gather.

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