Sometmes-things (the poem) — Summary

Francis ScudellariWednesday, January 18, 2012Contemplative

Sometimes-things, they aren’t drawn clearly enough. Sometimes-things aren’t meant to stand out. Black sits on black, then it moves around to white. Come lie back down with me here, I’ll tell you about them. They’re most times things, but sometimes I see them and they feel much closer to something living. It’s not that they speak or move, it’s something in the way they lie so still but are still shaking within. Are you shaking now too? No it’s not shaking, it’s a hum. A string continues to play its song, much later than, long after, we’ve stopped listening. Long after we’ve stopped. Can they be, when I know they’re not? I can’t see them seeing me or being, and they’re not like me. They’re more and they’re not, but it’s just then, when they are just things to me. It’s then-- are you still listening-- sometimes I know I disappoint myself by thinking it. Sometimes I know they mean to have more meaning than I can find in them. In the blank somewhere spaces where I lag behind them, sometimes I crave to catch up. The wind can make such a pretty knocking sound if the tree’s hands will play along. No don’t get up. I’m almost done. I’m trying to tell you I want to be that someone who’s willing to live sometimes like them, and when not, not frightened of some place where I’ll lie down by them.

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The speaker is lying next to someone, talking softly about "sometimes-things": objects that blur into the background, barely drawn, not meant to stand out. Most of the time they're just things. But now and then they seem almost alive, not because they move or speak, but because they lie so still while seeming to hum or tremble inside, like a string still sounding after everyone has stopped listening.

What the speaker feels is a mix of longing and self-doubt. They suspect they're foolish for imagining life in objects, and they sense these things hold more meaning than they can reach. They want to catch up with them. The poem ends with a wish: to live a little like these things, at ease with stillness, and not to be afraid of eventually lying down beside them.

The mood is hushed and intimate. The interruptions to the listener ("are you still listening," "no don't get up") make it feel like a whispered confession in the dark, tender and a little uncertain.

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