Truth — Poem analysis

Gary CorseriCheerful

He had a little truth; He held it with his might. A little, shining thing To get him through the night.

Someone with wider eyes Showed him a bigger truth: Something to tantalize: Truth upon truth on truth!

Truth threatened all he knew. His precious world went turvy. Truth used to be so straight, And now it was so curvy.

He cut his truth in two. (It was easier to hold.) Half went into the bin. Half he held till he sold.

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Gary Corseri's "Truth" sounds like a nursery rhyme, and that is its trick. "He had a little truth" recalls the familiar "had a little…" pattern of children's verse, and the short lines, plain words and tidy four-line stanzas all promise something harmless. What the poem delivers is a small fable about what people do with ideas too big for them, and it ends somewhere far less innocent than it began.

The story is easy to follow. A man owns one modest truth and grips it "with his might" because it gets him "through the night." It is a "little, shining thing," something like a coin or a lamp, a comfort to carry in the dark. Then "someone with wider eyes" offers him a "bigger truth." The poem never says this newcomer is mistaken, and that matters. The trouble lies in the man's reaction. "Truth upon truth on truth!" piles up like objects stacked on a shelf, and the exclamation mark reads as excitement and alarm at once. The word "tantalize," which comes from the myth of Tantalus, adds the idea of something dangled just out of reach.

The third stanza shows the man's world collapsing, in the language of a joke. "Turvy" is half of the idiom "topsy-turvy," so the phrase has already been cut in two before the man cuts his truth in two. The contrast between "straight" and "curvy" is geometric and tidy, but "curvy" has a slightly playful, even sensuous ring. That suggests the new truth is attractive as well as threatening. Notice too who does the threatening: "Truth threatened all he knew." Truth is the aggressor, and the man is the one under siege.

The last stanza brings the man's decision, and the tone drops to flat, practical reporting. "He cut his truth in two" is stated like a household task. The parenthesis, "(It was easier to hold.)", reads like a muttered excuse. His comfort now outranks the truth itself. One half goes "into the bin," as if it were rubbish. The other half he keeps "till he sold." The poem never uses the word "half-truth," but the reader supplies it, and the poem is sharper for leaving it unsaid.

The verb "hold" quietly tracks the man's decline. He first "held it with his might," which is devotion. Then truth becomes "easier to hold," which is convenience. Finally he "held till he sold," which is waiting for a buyer. "Hold" and "sold" also rhyme, and only one consonant separates them. That suggests there is little distance between keeping a belief and selling it.

The sound of the poem supports this. Most stanzas follow a loose pattern in which only the second and fourth lines rhyme: "might/night," "turvy/curvy," "hold/sold." The first and third lines are left unmatched, as though something is missing. The second stanza is the exception. It rhymes "eyes" with "tantalize," but its other pair is "truth" with "truth," the same word repeated. This is a rhyme that isn't really a rhyme, an echo of a single word, and it suits the dizzy sense of truths multiplying. The rhythm shifts accordingly. "To get him through the night" is steady and almost lullaby-like. "Truth upon truth on truth!" stumbles forward. "Half he held till he sold" ends on hard, clipped sounds, with a commercial word that closes the poem like a till drawer.

The poem is significant because it manages so much in so little space. There is no villain, and the man does nothing monstrous. He wants to feel secure, and the poem shows how reasonable each step is: first fear, then a convenient shortcut, then a profit. It also leaves a question open. We are never told whether the bigger truth was right, only that it was too much to carry, and that makes the fable hard to dismiss. Most readers can recall trimming an idea until it fit a conversation, or an argument, or a purpose. The poem's light rhymes make that habit look both ordinary and a little shameful.

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