Soberiety — Summary

ginoparadelaContemplative

It was fun when I thought about loving again What a weird thought to start the day. Like thinking about wine or champagne when you're still hung-over, Or like thinking about that sitcom everybody but you hates. Pain is a thing that people must face anyway, I mean, isn't pain part of the package deal? I remembered when she held me years ago Her hands were as cold as uncooked cordon blu. I think she was scared or maybe it was me I dunno, I couldn't remember. That was great. Well, at least I held her hand It even took me a bloody month. Love is a dreadful concoction It's amazing how people like to keep on drinking. Soberiety comes like a stab to the side, You don't know when it'll happen But you'll know when it's there. I wonder why I'm thinking about her Maybe it's just conscious Deja Vu Or maybe... Just maybe... A part of me still hopes. Nah. I don't think so. I've been sober for months.

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The speaker wakes up with an unexpected thought: what if he loved someone again? He compares it to craving wine while hung-over, something faintly absurd and a little self-destructive. The whole poem runs on that comparison, treating love as an intoxicating drink and the aftermath of heartbreak as the hangover. The title's coined word, "Soberiety," suggests the clear-headed sting of giving it up.

A memory surfaces of holding a girl's cold hand, which took him a month to work up to. He jokes about it, saying "That was great," but the shrug of "I dunno, I couldn't remember" hints at how much he's hiding behind casual language. He calls love "a dreadful concoction" and marvels that people keep drinking it. Then comes the slip: "A part of me still hopes." He quickly shuts it down with "Nah," and insists he's been sober for months.

The mood is wry and awkward, but the humor reads like a shield. The final line sounds more like someone convincing himself than stating a fact.

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