All Things Return to the Safeway Parking Lot — Poem analysis

Graham IsaacContemplative

the crawl of injured crows. the burns in the yard, strewn cigarettes. the jackhammer clang. the clipboard girl’s ponytail.

the three cop cars by the north entrance. the maple bar scent, wafting. the laughing men throw back their heads. the laughing women hold their stomachs.

the sun, breaking over the bbq stand. the sun, breaking over the cheap seafood kiosk. the sun, breaking over the apartments on the lake. the rain, breaking the sun.

the crowd, gathered by the corner, waiting for a light, or a bus, or a man in a car, or a woman in heels, grows and shrinks, but never disappears.

the mothers who panic at the mere existence of this corner and the lazy mornings, coming off nights that never ended. the street that curves into the city limits. the hills everyone trying to reclaim. the hoarse bark of rottweilers, behind chainlink, roped to stakes in a muddy yard.

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Nobody in Graham Isaac's "All Things Return to the Safeway Parking Lot" says "I," and nobody is given a name. The poem works like a slow camera panning across a supermarket lot, stopping on whatever drifts into view: a crow, a ponytail, a patrol car, a doughnut smell. The title promises a kind of gravity, as though everything in this town, the sad, the funny, the shady and the hopeful, gets pulled back to one slab of asphalt. The central idea is that a place we usually treat as a non-place, somewhere you cross on the way to something else, holds the whole community, damage and delight together. It keeps doing so whether or not anyone approves.

The form carries that idea. Nearly every line begins with "the" and is a fragment with no main verb, so the poem reads as a list rather than a story. Nothing is ranked. "The crawl of injured crows" sits beside "the clipboard girl's ponytail" with the same level attention. That first line is striking because crows should be flying, and here they crawl, a small image of things brought low. The hard consonants of crawl, crows, cigarettes, clang and clipboard make the opening stanza rattle, and "jackhammer clang" is almost a sound effect. Each line ends in a full stop, so the pace is stop-start, like someone walking and pausing to look.

The second and third stanzas set warmth and warning side by side. "The three cop cars by the north entrance" is followed at once by "the maple bar scent, wafting," as if trouble and pastry share the same air. Then come the laughing men who "throw back their heads" and the laughing women who "hold their stomachs." The two lines mirror each other, and the poem never says what is funny. Joy is simply part of the scenery. The third stanza turns on repetition: "the sun, breaking over" appears three times, each time above something unglamorous, a bbq stand, a "cheap seafood kiosk," apartments on the lake. The repeated phrase sounds like a blessing handed out evenly. Then the grammar shifts: "the rain, breaking the sun." Now "breaking" acts on something, and the light is interrupted. Beauty here is real but brief.

The fourth stanza is the only one with a main verb, and what it describes is a crowd that "grows and shrinks, / but never disappears." The syntax stretches to match the waiting, with its chain of "or"s: "a light, or a bus, or a man in a car, or a woman in heels." The list slides from ordinary waiting toward something the poem leaves unsaid. Judging by the imagery, some of these people may be waiting on informal meetings or deals, but Isaac only hints. The final stanza widens to the edge of town, "the street that curves into the city limits," and lets in an outside judgment: "the mothers who panic at the mere existence of this corner." The word "mere" is quietly sceptical, and the poem never quite sides with the panic. "The hills everyone trying to reclaim" stays open too. Reclaim them from what, and for whom? Then comes the longest line of all, "the hoarse bark of rottweilers, behind chainlink, roped to stakes in a muddy yard." It answers the crows of the opening, since both are creatures damaged or held in place. The commas in that last line work like tethers, and the line drags where the earlier ones snapped.

There is no rhyme, and the poem needs none. Its music comes from repeated "the"s, doubled laughter and tripled sunrises, which give a list the feel of a chant. What makes it worth reading is its refusal of easy answers. It does not condemn the corner as the nervous mothers do, and it does not prettify it either. The injured crows and the shared laughter get equal space. Ending on barking dogs instead of a resolution suggests that nothing here is tidied up. The poem treats attention as a form of respect, and on the page the parking lot becomes a place that deserves to be looked at.

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