leaching — Poem analysis

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I am dislodging your lies, like leeches off my skin, Replacing them with the soothing balm of my truth.

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Three lines are enough for Harbor to stage a small drama. Something has fastened itself to the speaker, the speaker works it loose, and the skin is tended afterwards. The poem is about taking back the truth of yourself from someone else's falsehoods. Its central idea is that recovery has two parts, removal and repair. Getting rid of the lies is not enough, because something has to be put in their place.

The whole poem rests on one image. Lies are compared to leeches, creatures that attach quietly, feed without being noticed, and hold on. That comparison says something about how the lies worked. They did not strike once and leave. They stayed and drew something out of the speaker for as long as they could. The poem never says what was drained, and the restraint helps. Readers can supply confidence, calm or self-respect from their own experience. The phrase "off my skin" keeps the damage physical and close. The lies are on the body, not just in the mind.

The title adds another layer. "Leaching" is not quite "leeching," but the two words look and sound alike, so the leeches of the poem hover behind the title. To leach is to drain something away gradually, as rain carries nutrients out of soil, so the word suggests slow loss rather than a sudden blow. It is also a present participle, an action still happening, and it matches the first line's "I am dislodging." The speaker does not say "I have removed." The tense implies a process still under way, which is more honest than a triumphant finish. The lowercase title is quiet in the same way.

The verb "dislodging" is a careful choice. The speaker could have torn, ripped or flung the lies away, but "dislodge" suggests something wedged in and stubborn, and it fits an animal that resists being pulled off. Even the sound is effortful, with its clunking d-l-dg cluster. Compare that with the third line, where "soothing balm" brings soft s sounds and long, open vowels, and the mouth relaxes. The language moves from struggle to relief just as the sentence does.

The poem's shape follows the same path. It has no rhyme, and none is needed. The lines grow in a clear pattern, roughly seven syllables, then six, then twelve. The first two are short and clipped, like the tugging of the removal. The last line stretches out, carried along by small unstressed words ("with the," "of my"), and it feels like balm being spread. There is also an oddity in the capitalisation. Line two begins in lowercase because it continues the sentence, yet line three begins with a capital even though the sentence has not ended. It could be a slip, but it can also be read as a turn, a fresh start after the clearing is done.

The pronouns keep a kind of ledger: "your lies" against "my truth." We never learn who "you" is or what happened between the two. The poem withholds that history, so it can fit almost any betrayal, whether in a friendship, a family or a relationship. "My truth" is a loaded phrase. Some readers may hear it as a purely personal version of events, but set against "lies" it sounds like ownership. The speaker takes back authority over their own story. Grammatically, "them" in the last line could point to the lies or to the leeches. Either way, the harmful thing is the one being replaced.

The name Harbor, which is all we are given, also suggests a reading. To harbor is to shelter something, and also to keep hold of it, as in harboring a grudge. Read that way, the poem is the speaker refusing to harbor the lies any longer and offering their own skin a harbor of a different kind.

The poem is worth reading for its compression. In one sentence it moves from disgust to comfort, and it never explains or accuses. It trusts a single extended metaphor to carry the whole emotional arc. For students, it shows how little a poem needs to build a complete story of harm, resistance and healing: one image, a few well-chosen verbs, and a final line long enough to breathe in.

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